Bug #38730 Section 20 doc grammer
Submitted: 11 Aug 2008 20:11 Modified: 11 Aug 2008 22:30
Reporter: Mike Frank Email Updates:
Status: Closed Impact on me:
None 
Category:MySQL Server: Documentation Severity:S3 (Non-critical)
Version:4.1/5.0/5.1 OS:Any
Assigned to: Jon Stephens CPU Architecture:Any

[11 Aug 2008 20:11] Mike Frank 
Description:
20.1. MySQL Cluster Overview

A MySQL Cluster consists of a set of computers, each running a one or more processes which may include a MySQL server, a data node, a management server, and (possibly) a specialized data access programs. The relationship of these components in a cluster is shown here: 
and (possibly) a specialized data access programs.
Actually entire section is not at the same level as the doc in general.

20.1.1. MySQL Cluster Core Concepts

An SQL node is   

How to repeat:
read manual

Suggested fix:
Entire second paragraph could be rewritten.  Its not worded well and doesn't make a lot of sense.

Also

A SQL node  (not an sql node)
[11 Aug 2008 22:30] Jon Stephens 
Removed 2 superfluous occurrences of 'a'.

Notes:

(1) I would probably refer to these as 'typos' rather than errors in grammar.

(2) 'SQL' and 'MySQL' are officially pronounced 'ess-queue-ell' and 'my-ess-queue-ell', respectively, so 'an SQL' is correct. See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SQL and last paragraph at http://dev.mysql.com/doc/refman/5.1/en/what-is-mysql.html.

(3) There's no MySQL Cluster chapter in the 6.0 Manual (try to load http://dev.mysql.com/doc/refman/6.0/en/mysql-cluster.html); updated affected versions accordingly.

Changesets: http://lists.mysql.com/commits/51356 and http://lists.mysql.com/commits/51357